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Deviousness `ChewedKandi has certainly gone out of her way to keep the vector community on the right path. Always making sure that her talents are infinitely scalable, Sharon has put her bezier curves to excellent use, and firmly anchored herself as an inspirational leader. We're absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for June 2013 to `ChewedKandi. Congratulations, Sharon! Read More
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Well first thing first is her face, I don't see anything wrong with it. Nice job on her eyes too.
Second part is her fingers, I have a feeling that both of her index fingers are being too short.
Third is her right part hairs (left part in picture) looks like in a different quality with the left part of her hairs. The left part has more details, as in darker shadow and much more lines defining the hairs, but not in the right part. It looks unfinished.
And lastly the flower. I think it could be done better, like soften it a bit since I feel a soft feeling from this picture but the flowers doesn't quite fit the image. It's okay to add flowers and I have read your tutorial to give it a fresh feeling. It indeed give a fresh feeling for the image, but maybe it looks too 3D-ish (black and too dark shadows after the light center) compared to the anime style you used.
Please forgive me if I have say many rude words but I never intend to offend you
Good luck on your next piece
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